Here is a story that I have written it is could through the doorway and I have put alot of detail and some S.A.L.T in it aswell.
100 word story Through the doorway
Once upon a time I went to sleep and then when I woke up and I was standing in the middle of nowhere. I was in some sort of white room that made me dizzy. literally the whole room was white then this very wrinkled old blue door comes out of nowhere so I started running towards it and when I got to it I carefully opened the door and it lead to our attic in the roof. And then I found another door but I didn't want to go into it just in case it leads into another room.
Hello Lyric,
ReplyDeleteI am Alodia from room 8. I really liked how you only used 100 words to make a wonderful story. Have you ever thought about changing the beginning of the story? If you want to check out my blog here is what you need to type in. https://odsalodiake.blogspot.com/
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Hi Alodia It's me Lyric I really like your comnent that you did on my blog post. Thanks for comenting on my blog.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Zoë.M in room 8
I like your post on Through the doorway and how you did it in 100 words you could think about changing The beginning to somthing to hook the reader in.
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I Lyric it's Joel from Rm23. I like your ideas of your 100 word challenge. It is very creative.
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Hi Lyric my names Felix. I really like you 100 word challenge and I want to see what happens next. What room would be on the other side of the door? In my 100 word challenge I did a similar story. Here is the link to my blog http://odsfelixf.blogspot.com/ blog ya later.
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